Sneak Peak into Book One

I've been working on editing the first draft of my novel.  This particular part hasn't been edited yet, so take it with a grain of salt... but I thought I'd introduce you to the characters of the series.  :)


      The phone rang once, and his deep baritone filled the line. “Cade Construction – oh, hi Becca. How are you today?”
      A smile filled her face, and it grew warm as she noticed that Zoe was watching her with a knowing look. “Doing great, thanks. We just closed on the property.”
      “All done signing your life away, then?” Levi chuckled, remembering purchasing his own land.
      “Yep, all done. So, I just wanted to confirm that we're still meeting at the property? The other investors will be headed out there in a few minutes.”
      “I'm already here, walking the property with our utility guys. Everyone is ready to get started, as soon as you give the word.”
      Becca sighed with pleasure. “It would be wonderfully satisfying to just say 'word' right now. But I'd just as soon wait until everyone is there, and we've all walked through everything together. So hopefully I'll be giving you the word this afternoon.” She laughed.
      “I'll be waiting, and ready.” The timbre of his voice reflected amusement. He hoped it didn't reflect anything more than amusement, although he heard it himself. He wanted her. Naked. In his bed. Underneath him. He could almost feel what it would be like to touch her, to watch her go over that edge the first time. He shook his head, noticed that his hand was trembling, and he needed to get his breathing under control. He was acting like a randy teenager who couldn't control his hormones. Disgusted, he put formality in his voice. “We'll see you soon, Becca.”
      She caught the stiffened tone, and wondered at the cause of it. “OK, thanks, Levi. See you in a bit.” Confused, she hung up, and caught Zoe again staring at her.
      “He wants you, and he doesn't want to want you. You do know that, right?” Zoe asked in her typical blunt style.
      “Hmmmmm....” was Becca's noncommittal reply.
      Zoe rolled her eyes at her best friend. “Whatever. You know I'm right.”
      Their arrival at the campground saved Becca from any reply. The girls changed clothes and were headed back out the door in just minutes. As soon as they pulled into the drive at the property, Becca saw Levi at his truck. She studied him with a critical eye, and knew Zoe was doing the same. A grin broke out on her face at Zoe's low whistle of approval as she braked to a stop and shifted into Park.
      “Girlfriend, if you don't take him, I'm gonna.”
      Fire flashed in Becca's eyes as she whipped her eyes to Zoe's. She'd been had. She knew it even before she saw her friend's unrepentant grin. But there it was, about to split her face. Becca rolled her eyes on a heavy sigh, and turned to get out of the truck.
      The other girls arrived just behind them, and came to stand in a loose circle. Stepping into the middle of the circle, she drew Levi next to her. “Everyone, this is Levi Cade with Cade Contracting. He'll be handling all of the construction on our project.” 
     Turning to Levi, she said, “Levi, please allow me to introduce you to Eostara Partnership, Ltd.”
     Motioning to her best friend, she said, “This is Zoe. She's a Family Practitioner, Doula and herbalist. She'll be our doctor in residence once we're up and running. She's also my best friend. Usually.” She shot Zoe a warning look, and they both grinned.
      “Next, we have Carly. Carly is a CPA and our treasurer. She'll handle all financial issues, loan paperwork, and such. If there's any problems on that end, Carly is my go-to girl. She'll hang a shingle out when we're all set up and going.” Carly smiled and let out a self-conscious wave.
      “This is Alyssa. She's our IT guru, and is in charge of all things technically and web-oriented. She'll be providing wifi access through the site as well. She'll also run our worship center and daycare center. She's a homeschooling mom, and will provide a homeschool coop, too.” Alyssa smiled and nodded a greeting.
      “JJ is a very talented tarot card reader. She'll be setting up shop here, too. If you want to know what's in your cards, she's your girl. She also makes amazing clothes and crafts, and I'm trying to convince her to open a shop for her crafts, too.” JJ gave Becca a severe look, then turned to Levi and nodded regally in response.
      “Shannyn will be in charge of our RV park and equestrian center. She's an event planner, and will handle all retreats and conferences that may take place in our community.” Shannyn smiled and lifted her hand in a small wave.
      “And last, but certainly not least, as none of us can do without her, is Angelina. Angelina is the only one out of all of us that has the gift of growing things. She'll be in charge of our community garden and agricultural areas.” Angelina blushed and nodded her head.
      “So, now that I've completely overwhelmed you...” she grinned, knowing it was true. The look on his face said it all. Stepping toward him, she whispered conspiratorially, “Don't worry, there won't be a quiz.” Clearing her throat on a laugh, she stepped back again to include everyone. “We all play a very important part in our community, and we'll all be moving out here over the coming year or so. We'll try very hard to stay out of your way, while still doing everything we need to, to get set up and going.”

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     No man could be resistant to the allure of working with these beautiful women, Levi considered. What Becca had obviously mistaken for concern at remembering names had really been simple shock at being surrounded by such extraordinarily beautiful, incredibly powerful women. He wondered slightly at his thought of the word powerful, but he didn't discount his instincts. He couldn't put his finger on it. But these women were not ordinary, in any sense of the word.

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I've introduced you to my friends now... so tell me what you think of them!  I can't wait to tell their stories...  each of them is unique in their own right.

My current work in progress


I write like
Stephen King
I Write Like by Mémoires, journal software. Analyze your writing!

Just out of curiosity, I analyzed the last four pages of my current WIP.  Now *this* is an author I've read quite a bit of!!!  :)  And I'm incredibly flattered that it thinks I write like him.  Now if only I could have his type of success, I'd be one very very happy camper!  :P

I write like...


I write like
Jack London
I Write Like by Mémoires, journal software. Analyze your writing!


Hmmm... maybe I should read some Jack London? :)

I did it, I did it, I DID IT!! NaNoWriMo

I'm so excited. 
I did it! 
I completed NaNoWriMo! 
I'm a winner!!! 
Woooohoooo! 

OK, so I've completed the challenge portion of writing 50K words in 30 days, made extremely difficult because I had two bouts of not writing for several days in a row, so here, the last day of NaNo, I still had to write nearly 10K words.  But I did it! 

I still have another chapter to go on my novel to tie up all the loose ends.  And, of course, I've already found things I left out.  Things that were in my head, but never made it to the page.  So I have comments "scribbled" on to my manuscript that will have to be fixed on the second draft, once I truly complete my first draft.  But none of that takes away from the fact that I've never made it this far before, so this is truly, truly a HUGE thing for me to celebrate!

Just so that you'll understand how much of a challenge this was for me, I'm also posting my graph.  You'll see that I had two very large plateaus.  Normally, this is when I would have called it quits.  But thanks to my writing conference and HUGE support from my family and friends, I pushed through both of those plateaus and got finished. 

The only real frustration I had was tonight.  The 50,103 that NaNo registered?  My word processing program has that at 51,023.  So, nearly 1000 words that didn't count?  When you're only writing 50K, 1K is a large amount.  And my analytical brain wants to know what it didn't like about those words.

Okay, it's after midnight.  I still have things to do before bed, so I'm going to call it a night.  Thanks for reading and celebrating with me.  Once I have my second draft, I may post a few short scenes from the book, see if you like this one as much as the second one that I've already posted scenes from.  :)

Hope everyone has a great day!

Today

Last night, I was able to get a fair jump on catching up some on NaNoWriMo.  I think my story is shaping up nicely, although I'm already thinking about all of the editing I'll be doing on it.  :)  I'm trying not to do it now, as the main point of NaNo, as I understand it, is to get the first (very rough) draft finished.  It must have a beginning, a middle, and an end.  Then I have all the time I need to whip it into shape afterward.  That's my understanding, obviously, but that's what I'm trying to do.  I'm hoping by the time I do the first revision, I'll have a book worth showing my First Readers for feedback.  :) 

I'm very lucky to have three people interested in reading it.  My Hubby (who doesn't read romance, but knows a lot about construction, so he'll be able to point out any errors I've made with the story there), my Mom (who does read romance and paranormal, along with a host of other things, and who I got my addiction to reading from, Thank You, Mom!!!!), and my friend Melissa (she'll always be Missy to me, who reads as voraciously as I do, and has been my guinea pig since we were fifteen, reading angsty poetry to each other and encouraging each other in our writing... she's also an excellent copyeditor, so she'll have her work cut out for her... hehehehe).  :) 

So I have some awesome first readers, and I'm looking forward to being able to have a manuscript that I can show them, even if it's still a couple of months out.  They're already looking forward to reading my second and third book in my witchy/pagan series, as much, I think, as I'm looking forward to writing them!  :)  Now just to see if an agent or publisher will be interested in publishing them... and that thought brings on cold sweats, so we won't go there yet.  I'm going to have to depend on my husband to keep me motivated to send it out the door when that time comes. 

But I'm getting way, way ahead of myself.  It's shaping up to look like the first draft will be more than 50K long, but I'm still hoping to finish in the next 11 days, to qualify to "win" NaNoWriMo.  So, we'll see.  I can use all the good luck, good wishes, good vibes, and/or prayers you care to send!  :)

I've been week two'ed

I've been week two'ed.  :D  Week two of NaNoWriMo hit me like a ton of bricks.  I've been told this is a phenomenon that affects a lot of participants in which we just can't keep up the momentum of week one.  But I am happy to report that I pushed through.  I continued to write, albeit a little more slowly, and I learned some things about my characters that I didn't know before.  ;)  But I'm within 1011 words of being caught up, and I hope I'll be able to do that and more a little later today.  So wooohhoooo for pushing through, even when life's happening all around you, and it's tough to do!  :)

Hope everyone else is having a great November!  Let me know how you're doing!

NaNoWriMo update

I haven't been feeling well today.  I still don't know if I've caught a bit of a bug (as my hubby was feeling poorly yesterday), or if it's a lack of sleep.  Last night, I was up until approximately 1:30 or 2:00.  When I fell asleep, I was plagued with dreams of my characters.  I woke up several times during the night, confused and unsure of where I was or who I was (fever?  or my characters?).  I finally got up at 4:30 and made some coffee, I just couldn't get back to sleep.  Inspiration struck, and I wrote in the neighborhood of 2000 words.  By 9:00am, I was exhausted and laid down for an hour and a half.

After that, I have been up and down all day, nauseated, headache, achy, and tired.  In fact, even now, I've been awake for less than an hour, and I'm already wanting to lay down again.  I did write more tonight, but I think I'm done for the night.  I'm going to have to go to bed soon, try to sleep some more.  Hope I feel better tomorrow.  Ugh.  Lots to do this week!

Wishing everyone a very happy November!!!  If you're NaNo'ing, let me know.  I love writing buddies!!!

I might post an excerpt from the book I'm working on in the next day or so.  It's still a very very rough first draft, but I may put a short clip here in the next few days.