This is my book trailer for my novel (first attempt). Below is the instructor's comment.
My book is nowhere near finished (I'm actually just restarting it for a different genre).But here goes. First draft:
Thirteen friends have a dream (photo of a witch's coven) of a place where they can just BE (photo of meadow/forest) who they are (photo of friends laughing, talking OR another shot of a coven) Eostara... A New Beginning (photo of a monument/entrance with the name) Becca begins construction (photo of excavators, etc.) Her contractor, Levi, at her side (photo of a man and a woman looking at blueprints) Strange things begin to happen (photo evoking confusion) Vandalism (broken windows) Threats (threatening letter) An attraction neither expected (desire-filled look) Can Levi help Becca protect herself (photo of a man stepping in front of a woman) While protecting his heart? (?) Eostara - A New Beginning (photo of book cover for remainder of trailer) By Moira Ivy From (publisher's name) Available in bookstores on xx/xx/xx
Good job. Well thought out, and the images you're looking for fit well.